dVerse Poets Pub prosery Monday where Sanaa is our hostess.

This evening, I would like you to write a Prose piece which includes the line: “The hills so dry, so dense the underbrush, that where I pushed my way the giant hush was changed to soft explosion.”

Prosery: A View from the Hills

Dust Roads

I haven’t walked those roads in years, yet memory returns without invitation. Growing up on the west coast of Norway, silence had a shape—mountains standing watch, roads curling where old stories lived.

But this memory comes from somewhere warmer, stranger. Fuerteventura perhaps, where dry earth cracks beneath your feet and even the wind sounds thirsty.

I remember wandering too far once, chasing quiet as if it owed me answers.

The hills so dry, so dense the underbrush, that where I pushed my way the giant hush was changed to soft explosion.

A bird startled upward.

My own breath startled too.

Funny how grief works like that—stillness, stillness… then suddenly something hidden takes flight.


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With love

— Maggie The Afterlove Voice 💫


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21 responses to “Dust Roads”

  1. kim881 Avatar

    I love that, Maggie, ‘silence had a shape’ and the description of Fuerteventura, ‘where dry earth cracks beneath your feet and even the wind sounds thirsty’. Very atmospheric – and grief as a bird that takes flight.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Kim 💜
      Grief is strange like that.

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      1. kim881 Avatar

        My pleasure, Maggie. It certainly is.

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  2. Aptivi Avatar
    Aptivi

    That’s really so beautifully written, my friend! ☺️

    Today went very well, I really enjoyed it! I’m heading to sleep soon as I’m starting to feel sleepy. Enjoy the rest of your night. 🌙☺️

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you my friend 💜

      Wishing you a good night’s sleep 😴

      Hasta mañana

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      1. Aptivi Avatar
        Aptivi

        You’re most welcome, my friend 💜

        Thank you so much. Hasta mañana! ☺️

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  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    So well written, and how you used the memories as well as the startling of the bird as a metaphor for grief, so well done

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Bjőrn 💜

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  4. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is so deeply poignant, Maggie. I am especially moved by; “But this memory comes from somewhere warmer, stranger. Fuerteventura perhaps, where dry earth cracks beneath your feet and even the wind sounds thirsty.”

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Sanaa 💜

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  5. Carol anne Avatar

    Loved it, Maggie 🌺🌺💜💜

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Carol anne 💜 💜

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  6. lifelessons Avatar

    Wow! Beautifully done. I kept choosing favorite lines and then decided every one was my favorite. Every one stood up to the given line and gave it a run for its money. I loved your piece.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much ❤️

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  7. Sunra Rainz Avatar

    A gorgeous piece of writing, Maggie. And I love the ending.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Sunra 💜

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  8. Kim of Glover Gardens Avatar

    Funny, indeed, how grief works like that. You nailed it.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Kim 💜

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  9. lesleyscoble Avatar

    I love this line “Fuerteventura perhaps, where dry earth cracks beneath your feet and even the wind sounds thirsty.” So evocative. 👏

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Lesley .
      Happy you liked that line 💜☀️

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