12.01.2026

In response to: https://melissalemay.wordpress.com/2026/01/12/melissas-fandango-flash-fiction-challenge-355/

At the Water’s Edge

He did not rush.


The sand bore his weight without complaint, grains remembering him long after he stopped moving. Grass leaned in, curious but cautious, as if it knew this was a boundary moment—neither land nor water fully claiming him.


The water watched back.


Still. Green. Reflective.


He lowered his head slowly, reverently, as though greeting an older self. The surface trembled, just once, then settled. Two worlds touched—scale and ripple, breath and silence.


From afar, one might call him dangerous.


But danger is loud only when misunderstood.


Here, he was patience shaped like muscle. Survival carved in quiet. Time wearing a body.


He drank without haste, knowing the river would wait. Knowing the shore would still be there. Knowing power does not need to announce itself.


Somewhere beyond the grass, life hurried on— voices, clocks, footsteps chasing meaning.


At the edge of water and earth, the crocodile remained.


Unmoved. Unprovoked. Perfectly aware.

💫Maggie

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18 responses to “Melissa’s Fandango Flash Fiction Challenge #355”

  1. poetisatinta Avatar

    loved this 🐊

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much 🌷 That made me happy 😊

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  2. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Very good Maggie.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much 🌷

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  3. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    Excellent – bravo! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much 🌷

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  4. Sadje Avatar

    A profound take Maggie

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Sadje 🌷

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re very welcome.

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  5. lesleyscoble Avatar

    This is beautiful,Maggie 💚🐊

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much 🌷

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  6. yvettemcalleiro Avatar

    Awesome piece, Maggie!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Yvette 🌷

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  7. Melissa Lemay Avatar

    I find so much wisdom in your words. “But danger is loud only when misunderstood.” So true.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Melissa 😊

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      1. Melissa Lemay Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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