In response to: https://wp.me/p1GTyJ-8MX
This poem is written for the dVerse Poetics challenge inspired by Elizabeth Bishop

Elizabeth Bishop (1911 –1979)

The Bus Stop Laundry

The bench is sticky
with old rain and soda rings.
A timetable peels at the corners,
sunburned into guesswork.
Someone has dropped a mitten—
child-sized, red once,
now the color of tired apples.
A woman waits beside me
with a basket balanced on her knee.
Not groceries—
laundry.
Damp shirts breathe out soap and rust.
One sleeve trails like a tongue
touching the pavement.
She keeps smoothing the pile
though it will wrinkle again.
Her thumbnail is cracked,
crescented with blue thread.
Every few minutes she checks the road,
not for the bus exactly—
more for permission.
Across the street
the laundromat door yawns open.
Machines thump steadily,
white moons turning behind glass.
A sign flickers:
OPEN
OPEN
O—
Inside the basket
a small sock clings to a towel,
won’t let go.
She doesn’t separate them.
She lets them ride together.
When the bus comes
it sighs like it’s been carrying this day too long.
She rises, careful not to spill
what is already damp, already worn.
As she steps aboard
the mitten slips from the bench.
I pick it up.
It is still warm.
Someone, somewhere,
has folded this life once.
Someone has counted socks.
Someone keeps things together
when they could easily be lost.

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23 responses to “The Bus Stop Laundry”

  1. Dora Avatar

    Simply beautiful, Maggie, the way you’ve brought the three elements of poetry Bishop mentions into a poem that shows mere laundry to be far more than the sum of its parts. Every detail sings. I love it.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much — that means a great deal to me. I’m especially touched that you felt how the ordinary details were meant to open into something larger. Bishop teaches us how to look, and I tried to follow her lead with care.

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      1. Dora Avatar

        I like that, that “Bishop teaches us how to look” — indeed she does, and so have you in this poem.

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  2. rothpoetry Avatar

    Your descriptions are wonderful. The spinning laundry, the bus coming to a sighing stop. And then leave us with that sock!! Beautifully written, Maggie!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much — I’m really glad those moments stayed with you. The sock felt like it needed the last word.
      😆

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        And it worked so well! You are welcome!

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  3. pandamoniumcat Avatar

    Oh wow, I love this, it slowly creeps up on you like the best poems do.

    “When the bus comesit sighs like it’s been carrying this day too long.” Brilliant line, exactly how it is. Love it!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you — I love how you put that. Sometimes a day really does feel like something we’re all carrying.

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  4. lifelessons Avatar

    You set the scene perfectly and completely with original lines such as:

    A timetable peels at the corners,
    sunburned into guesswork.

    and:

    One sleeve trails like a tongue
    touching the pavement.

    Your poem is beautifully written.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much — I’m really touched that those lines stayed with you. I’m glad the scene felt complete and alive to you.

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  5. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    A small act of kindness a gentle reminder to be human

    Nice one, Maggie

    🎇much love

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you — I love how you put that. Sometimes a small act really is enough to remind us. Much love ✨

      Like

  6. Laura Bloomsbury Avatar

    Maggie this is gloriously vivid -the whole tangle of clothes, in lives, in casual encounters – and the inner outer world of the laundrette – bravo – a joy to read

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you for this — I love that you noticed the inner and outer worlds of the laundrette. That quiet crossing felt important to me.

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  7. kim881 Avatar

    I enjoyed my visit to the bus stop laundry via your wonderful observations, Maggie, which appealed to all the senses, from the sticky bench and peeled timetable to the lost mitten ‘the color of tired apples’, the damp shirts that ‘breathe out soap and rust’ and the thump of the machines. And I felt the bus sigh ‘like it’s been carrying this day too long’. The prompt must have woken your inner Bishop.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much — this means a great deal to me. I’m really touched that the sensory details carried you there, and I love how you put it: perhaps Bishop did stir something awake. I’m grateful for your thoughtful reading.

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      1. kim881 Avatar

        My pleasure, Maggie

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  8. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    This poem really drew me in. Beautifully done.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Happy to hear that it drew you in 🌷. Thank you so much.

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  9. SelmaMartin Avatar

    This! This is such a joy to read. Mesmerizingly beautiful. All of it. The imagery and featured image too. That woman’s cracked thumb fingernail—oh my. I’ll carry that image. Thanks so much. Xo, Selma

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you, Selma — your words mean a great deal to me. I’m especially glad that image stayed with you. Xo

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      1. SelmaMartin Avatar

        🙇🏻‍♀️

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