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After the Fast

There is a hunger
that is not for bread
but for being understood.
It prowls between sentences,
gnaws at silence,
waits at the door
like a stray cat
refusing dismissal.
I feed it words,
carefully chosen crumbs,
and hope
it learns
my name.

— Maggie
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25 responses to “After the Fast”

  1. Ron. Avatar

    Nice work. I’m totally with you. Thanks

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Ron 😊💜

      Like

  2. Truedessa Avatar
    Truedessa

    Yes, there is that hunger for understanding. Well said.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you 😊💜

      Like

  3. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    How cool is that comparison to a stray cat? What a wonderful description of this particular hunger.

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you 😊❤️. Happy you liked it .

      Liked by 1 person

  4. subversopus Avatar

    I loved the approach you took to this poem. As a fellow stray cat I rarely understand, what and why humans behave as they do! Awesome wordcrafting!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Maggie Avatar

      Ak, yes humans are not easy to understand.

      Liked by 2 people

  5. Lisa or Li Avatar

    Well-penned, Maggie. I do think we all crave that kind of sustenance <3

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Lisa 😊💜

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Lisa or Li Avatar

        You are welcome :)

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  6. Raivenne Avatar

    It prowls between sentences,gnaws at silence,waits at the door

    Ooh, how I love that.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Raivenne 😊💜

      Like

  7. kim881 Avatar

    Your quadrille resonated with me, Maggie, and I especially love the image of hunger prowling between sentences and gnawing at silence.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Kim 😊💜
      Happy it resonated.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. kim881 Avatar

        My pleasure, Maggie.

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  8. SelmaMartin Avatar

    Yes. I can see the hunger in its lovely face. It is a studious cat indeed. Beautiful, Maggie.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Selma 😊💜

      Liked by 1 person

      1. SelmaMartin Avatar

        My pleasure.

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  9. shaun tenzenmen Avatar

    Nicely written, Maggie 👏

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Shaun 💜😊

      Like

  10. Carol anne Avatar

    Lovely poem Maggie, xoxo

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you ❤️ 😊

      Like

  11. yvettemcalleiro Avatar

    Awesome poem, Maggie!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Yvette 😊

      Liked by 1 person

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