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Today’s topic :

So for today’s prompt we are turning our attention to compound words and revisiting a prompt that Grace posted in October 2021 that is the Compound Word Verse. (See here).

A poetry form invented by Margaret R. Smith

15 lines

5 stanzas

3 lines per stanza

rhyme scheme a,a,bmeter 8/8/3last line of each stanza includes a compound word using the same stem e.g. footsore, footstool, footage; OR underfoot; pussyfoot etc poem’s title includes the stem word

MTB: Compounding the Stem

Star Whispers

Beneath the stars I dream tonight,
Their ancient fires still burn so bright;
in starlight.

Across the dark the planets gleam,
They drift like lanterns through my dream;
soft starshine.

A meteor streaks through the night,
It leaves a silver thread of light;
a starfall.

I send my wishes to the sky,
And watch them wander, asking why;
O starbright.

When dawn arrives, stars fade from view,
Yet still their whispers guide me through;
my stardust.


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26 responses to “Star Whispers”

  1. Laura Bloomsbury Avatar

    I love the atmosphere you created here so visual that the reader is watching with the poet

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Laura.
      Fun trying out new forms

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  2. kim881 Avatar

    A star-studded compound word poem, Maggie! I love the way you captured light and movement: the planets gleaming and drifting like lanterns, and the meteor steaking and leaving a silver thread of light.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Kim 💜

      Yesterday we saw a magnificent star fall from the clear night sky.

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  3. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    So whimscal. I luv it

    much love

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Gillena 💜

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  4. erbiage Avatar

    maggie this is great i like the way it moves through evening dreams to the stardust you carry

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Happy to hear you enjoyed it.

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  5. Reena Saxena Avatar

    It creates a dreamy ambience.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      It does 😊

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  6. freyathewriter Avatar

    “A meteor streaks through the night,
    It leaves a silver thread of light;
    a starfall.”

    This is my favourite stanza – it’s beautiful! A lovely poem all around :)

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Freya 😊

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love what you did… star is a great stem

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Björn 😊.

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  8. Frewin55 Avatar
    Frewin55

    What can I say – you are a star, Maggie…

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      We are all stars 😊

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      1. Frewin55 Avatar
        Frewin55

        Indeed we are, Maggie…

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  9. Helen Avatar

    I would love to hear you read this gorgeous poem aloud ~~ in the Pub one day?

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Helen.
      Happy you enjoyed my poem.

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  10. sreeja Harikrishnan Avatar

    Love that star atmosphere…those ending lines make it wholesome, perfect ending.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you 😊

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  11. Lisa or Li Avatar

    A beauty of a poem, Maggie.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Lisa ❤️

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      1. Lisa or Li Avatar

        You’re welcome <3

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  12. Carol anne Avatar

    This was a beautiful poem Maggie 🤗🤗💖💖😄😄

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you 💜

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