dVerse Poets Pub where Melissa is our hostess.

She gave us this prompt:

For today’s prompt, let’s have fun sans punctuation. You may capitalize lines, write in all lowercase, rhyme (or not), use enjambment or unique spacing, whatever other tools you use are completely up to you. Your poem must not be punctuated.

Unpunctuated

the shape of quiet

some mornings begin in fragments

coffee steam
cat paws
the soft remembering of another day

outside the wind
moves through dry places like it has forgotten
how to be gentle

still
the sun rises

still
flowers insist

still
some small hopeful thing
inside me
opens its tired hands
toward light


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— Maggie The Afterlove Voice 💫


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28 responses to “The shape of quiet”

  1. Aptivi Avatar
    Aptivi

    Awesome my friend 👍

    I’m getting ready for sleep soon to recharge myself, so good night ☺️

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you my friend 💜.

      Have a good night .

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      1. Aptivi Avatar
        Aptivi

        You’re most welcome my friend 💜

        Until tomorrow ☺️

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  2. lynn__ Avatar

    Good to be still for a few moments before starting the day

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      That’s so true lynn 💜

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  3. erbiage Avatar

    always towards the light

    lovely

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Happy you liked it 💜

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  4. Melissa Lemay Avatar

    ”coffee steam / cat paws / soft remembering” how beautiful and peaceful. I especially love your last stanza.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Melissa 💜

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  5. poetisatinta Avatar

    this has a lovely tranquillity to it Maggie 🩷

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Ange 💜

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  6. Laura Bloomsbury Avatar

    marvellously contemplative Maggie – your poem rises like steam from the morning coffee cup –

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Laura 💜

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  7. kim881 Avatar

    You shape of quiet resonates with me, Maggie, as I’m a morning person and am familiar with mornings that begin in fragments and cat paws, and I love the thought of flowers insisting.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Kim 💜

      I have become a morning person over the years. Up at 5 am to get my husband ready for the ambulance transport and driving my youngest to the bus.

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      1. kim881 Avatar

        You’re most welcome, Maggie. 💕

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  8. shaun tenzenmen Avatar

    “the soft remembering of another day”

    I like this line and, for me, slightly provocative idea. I usually journal at the end of the day and somewhat feel kind of done with it. Of course, I remember all the things that happened but the mornings are still bringing me into the focus of what lies ahead. Perhaps taking a moment to remember yesterday would be a good idea over that morning coffee. Nice write Maggie 👏

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Shaun ☀️

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  9. thetigressawakens Avatar

    Beautifully evoked and love the optimistic tone, “still
    some small hopeful thing
    inside me
    opens its tired hands
    toward light”

    Classic line! Well done! 🩵

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Tigress 💜❤️

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  10. paeansunplugged Avatar

    Lovely, Maggie. 💓

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much 💜

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      1. paeansunplugged Avatar

        My pleasure, Maggie.

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  11. Jennifer Wagner Avatar
    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Jennifer 💜

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  12. Carol anne Avatar

    this is beautiful Maggie 💜💜🤗🤗

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you my friend 💜 💜

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