The Witness Who Wasn’t There

This week’s Story Starter teaser is:

The accident wasn’t her fault.

Fandango’s Story Starter #263

The Witness Who Wasn’t There

The accident wasn’t her fault.

That was what the old woman kept telling her.

The problem was, nobody else could see the old woman.

Every night since the crash, she appeared in the passenger seat—same grey coat, same silver hair, same calm voice.

“You didn’t make him cross the centre line.”

Police said there had been no witnesses. The other driver was dead. Her memory stopped seconds before impact, leaving only headlights, screaming brakes, and the sickening crunch of metal.

Then one night, she finally asked the question she had been afraid to ask.

“How do you know?”

The old woman turned towards her.

For the first time, she smiled.

“Because I was sitting beside him.”


#FSS


With love, coffee, poetry, and stardust,

— Maggie The Afterlove Voice 💫

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10 responses to “Fandango’s Story Starter”

  1. winningsetbacks Avatar

    That’s wonderful story, masterfully crafted. God enough for television series. I enjoyed it. Thanks

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you! 😊

      “Good enough for a television series” — careful, you’ll give me ideas! 😂
      Are you a director by any chance? I apparently already have the pilot episode. Now I just need someone to commission the other seven seasons!

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  2. winningsetbacks Avatar

    Masterfully crafted story. Good for TV’s series. I enjoyed it. Kudos,!

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  3. Fandango Avatar

    Wow, I didn’t expect that ending. Good storytelling, Maggie!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you, Fandango! 😊 I’m glad I managed to catch you with the ending — I was hoping that final line would come as a surprise.
      I had great fun with this Story Starter! 💜

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  4. Sadje Avatar

    Nicely done Maggie

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you my friend 💜❤️

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome ☺️

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  5. Carol anne Avatar

    lovely! A great story! xo

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you 💜

      Happy you enjoyed it .

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