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Our challenge is to write a descort, experimenting with, for example: varying line lengths; changing rhythms or meters; inconsistent rhyme schemes; different stanza shapes; shifts in voice or perspective; fragments alongside complete sentences; the use of another language; or dialect or unusual visual arrangements on the page.

Poetry Form: Descort

Two Homes

I come from rain.

From mountains leaning over fjords,
from green folded into green,
from winter darkness
and summer nights
that forgot
to become night.

I come from words
that still rise first
when I am tired—

hjem.

Home.

A small word.
A certain word.

Or so I thought.

Then August came
with suitcases
and children
and a promise:

one year.

Just one.

Un año.

The island laughed.

Here, the earth is not soft.

It is black stone,
red stone,
volcanic bone
breaking through dust.

The wind does not whisper.

Viento.

It pushes.
It rattles windows.
It carries sand across roads
and salt from an ocean
that refuses
to be background.

Norway rains inside me.

Fuerteventura burns beneath my feet.

Rain.
Sol.

Fjord.
Volcán.

Hjem.
Hogar.

Which one
am I supposed
to choose?

I still remember
the smell of wet forest,
snow beneath boots,
mountains reflected
in dark water—

but now I know
the silence of barrancos,

the green doors,
the fishing villages,

the way evening waits
until the heat loosens its grip,

the Moon rising
over an Atlantic horizon.

Sometimes
when I say home
I see two places.

That used to feel
like betrayal.

As though loving one
required leaving
the other behind.

But perhaps belonging
was never meant
to be tidy.

Perhaps the heart
does not understand borders.

Perhaps—

perhaps

—I am not standing
between two homes.

I am carrying both.

Rain
y sol.

Fjord
y volcán.

Norwegian words
beside Spanish ones,

north
inside south,

the woman who left
still walking beside
the woman who stayed.

And somewhere
between those two shores,

the Atlantic
keeps no argument.

It simply holds them.


Author’s note:

Hjem — Norwegian: home

Un año — Spanish: one year

Viento — Spanish: wind

Sol — Spanish: sun

Hogar — Spanish: home

Volcán — Spanish: volcano

Y — Spanish: and

Barrancos — Spanish: ravines/gullies


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31 responses to “Two homes”

  1. Grace Avatar

    I know that tension and rift between two homes with:
    Which one
    am I supposed
    to choose?

    Love that you included part of your colorful heritage in the poem.

    Norwegian words
    beside Spanish ones,

    Your authenticity comes through. Thanks for joining in.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Grace. 💜 I’m glad the tension between the two homes came through, especially since you understand that feeling yourself. After living in the Canary Islands for 15 years, Fuerteventura is very much home, but Norway will always be part of me too. I loved using the Norwegian and Spanish words side by side to reflect that little inner discord — two languages, two landscapes, two homes, but one life. Thank you for such an inspiring prompt.

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  2. Helen Avatar

    I enjoyed your poem immensely!! An amazing write ~~~

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Helen! 💜 I’m delighted you enjoyed it. This one came very much from the heart, so your lovely words mean a lot to me.

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  3. lynn__ Avatar

    I can feel both the tension and the acceptance of being from two places you call home/hjem/hogar. Beautifully written, Maggie!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Lynn. 💜 I love that you picked up on both the tension and the acceptance — that was exactly what I hoped to express. For a long time I thought “home” had to mean one place, but I’ve learned that the heart can belong to more than one. And I love seeing you write home/hjem/hogar back to me. 🥹❤️ Thank you!

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      1. lynn__ Avatar

        Of course…my pleasure is reading your poetry, Maggie :)

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  4. kaykuala Avatar
    kaykuala

    It pushes.
    It rattles windows.
    It carries sand across roads
    and salt from an ocean
    that refuses
    to be background

    Good description of the different scenario of different times and locations. It matched the form of the prompt! Great lines Maggie!

    Hank

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Hank. 💜 I’m especially glad you felt the changing locations and contrasts worked with the descort form. I wanted Norway and Fuerteventura to feel very different on the page, while still belonging to the same story. And the wind here certainly refuses to be ignored! Thank you for your lovely comment.

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  5. Carol anne Avatar

    A beautiful poem Maggie. Very good use of the prompt. I loved it! 🌹🌹💖💖

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much ,Carol Anne 💜😘

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  6. thetigressawakens Avatar

    Loved how you played with launguage in this one, and those last lines are straight up killa! “And somewhere
    between those two shores,

    the Atlantic
    keeps no argument.

    It simply holds them.”

    Excellent! 💚

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much! 💜 I had so much fun playing with the languages in this one, especially because the Norwegian and Spanish words became part of that feeling of living between two homes. I’m thrilled those final lines landed with you — they were the moment when the poem finally stopped arguing with itself. The Atlantic doesn’t ask me to choose; it simply holds both shores.

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Love what you wrote, and I did understand both the Spanish and Norwegian words… maybe it is the Atlantic that ties them together.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you, Björn. 💜 You mentioned the other day that I must have many stories about Norway — I suppose you finally got one, although I had to sneak Fuerteventura into it too!
      I love your thought that perhaps the Atlantic is what ties the two homes together. I think you may be right. Two very different shores, but the same ocean between them.

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  8. kim881 Avatar

    I’m having trouble commenting on posts this morning, so please excuse this is test comment, Maggie.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      No worries at all, Kim. 💜 Your test comment came through perfectly. I actually had the same problem with commenting the other day, so you’re definitely not alone. WordPress seems to have a few gremlins wandering around lately! Hopefully it sorts itself out soon.

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  9. kim881 Avatar

    Your two homes descort resonates with me, Maggie. I love the pictures you paint of the ‘mountains leaning over fjords, from green folded into green’ and the ‘summer nights that forgot to become night’, the island that laughed, where the earth is not soft but ‘black stone, red stone, volcanic bone breaking through dust’.  You captured the difference so well in the different line lengths. These lines reminded me of the way I missed my life in Germany when I moved to Ireland and then back to the UK:

    ‘Sometimes
    when I say home
    I see two places.

    That used to feel
    like betrayal’

    and

    ‘ am not standing
    between two homes.

    I am carrying both.’

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Kim. 💜 Now I’m especially glad your comments finally decided to behave! 😂
      Knowing that you have experienced something similar, moving from Germany to Ireland and then back to the UK, makes your response mean even more to me. That strange feeling of loving the life you have while still missing another place can be difficult to explain. For a long time I thought home had to be one place, but eventually I realised I didn’t have to choose — I could carry both. I’m also so glad you noticed the different line lengths; I wanted the form itself to carry some of that tension between the two landscapes. Thank you for such a thoughtful comment.

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  10. shaun tenzenmen Avatar

    Your poem has connected with many of us who have a similar feeling. Mine is between Australia and Thailand. You’ve captured our thoughts and feelings very well and this form is the perfect vehicle for it too. Great write Maggie 👏

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Shaun. 💜 It has been wonderful reading the comments and discovering how many of us share this feeling in different parts of the world. Australia and Thailand must give you two very different landscapes and cultures to carry too. I’m especially glad you felt the descort form suited the subject — the little shifts and contrasts seemed perfect for something as complicated as belonging to two places. Perhaps home doesn’t always have to be one place after all.

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  11. SelmaMartin Avatar

    oh I felt this.
    Perhaps the heart
    does not understand borders.

    perhaps for sure! The heart is its own organ/mind/person.

    this is so good. Thanks for sharing. Lovely.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Selma. 💜 I love what you said — perhaps the heart really doesn’t understand borders. We draw lines on maps and give places different names, but the heart seems perfectly capable of belonging in more than one place. It took me a while to understand that I didn’t have to choose between my two homes; I could simply carry both. Thank you for feeling this one with me.

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  12. freyathewriter Avatar

    Beautiful, Maggie. I have crossed internal borders from England to Wales, and still I feel this tussle that you speak of. Where is home/cartref? Where do I feel homesickness/hiraeth for? It’s a complicated state of being, and you captured it so well.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Freya. 💜 I love that you answered my hjem/hogar with cartref/hiraeth. It shows beautifully that this feeling isn’t really about how many miles or borders we cross. Home can become complicated wherever we go. Perhaps the hardest question isn’t “Where is home?” but accepting that the answer can be more than one place. Thank you for sharing your own experience with me. ❤️

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  13. sreeja Harikrishnan Avatar

    You have put those thoughts so beautifully…

    I still remember the smell of wet forest, snow beneath boots, mountains reflected in dark water— beautiful. Loved all those new words.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Sreeja. 💜 I’m so glad those images stayed with you. They are some of the things I still associate most strongly with Norway — the wet forests, snow beneath my boots and mountains reflected in the fjords. And I’m delighted you enjoyed the Norwegian and Spanish words too. Bringing the two languages together felt like another way of bringing my two homes onto the same page. ❤️

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      1. Maggie Avatar

        💜❤️💜

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  14. mihrankalaydjianblog Avatar

    Beautifully written and deeply touching. Your words capture the meaning of home and belonging so beautifully. ❤️

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Mihran. 💜 Home and belonging can mean so many different things, and writing this made me realise again that the heart doesn’t necessarily have to choose just one place. I’m so glad the poem touched you. Thank you for your beautiful words.

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