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Welcome, everyone. Dora here (Dreams from a Pilgrimage) hoping to tempt your poetic muses to sing songs of stone, be the stone as small as a pebble in a macadam pavement and a gem set in jewelry, or as towering as a mountain and cavernous as a canyon.Lyric petrology is a study of rocks that revolves around our relationship to them.I want you to write a poem featuring, if not centering, on rock or stone. The earth, so to speak, is your oyster.

Poetics: Lyric Petrologies

The Mountain Remembers

I have collected stones for years—
crystal, quartz,
small pieces of earth
that somehow asked
to come home with me.

But there is one stone
I could never carry.

Tindaya carries me.

She rises from the island
like an old thought,
volcanic bone beneath the sun,
holding footprints
where no feet remain.

Who stood here?

Who pressed the shape of themselves
into stone
and trusted time
to understand?

Perhaps they watched
the same Moon
I watch now.

Perhaps the Milky Way
spilled across their darkness
before roads,
before electric light,
before anyone thought
the stars were far away.

I place my hand
against the mountain.

Warm stone.
Wind.
Silence.

Yet something answers.

Not in words.

In bones.

In that strange recognition
that sometimes comes
when we arrive somewhere
we have never been
and still think—

I know you.

Footprints survive
where bodies cannot.

Names disappear.
Languages change.
Oceans keep moving.

Still the mountain remembers.

And when I leave,
I take no stone with me.

Some stones
are not ours
to carry.

Some stones
carry us.


Author’s note: Tindaya is a sacred mountain in Fuerteventura, Canary Islands. Locally, it is known as La Montaña Mágica — The Magic Mountain. Ancient foot-shaped engravings remain

carved into its stone.

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34 responses to “La montaña mágica — the magic mountain”

  1. Aptivi Avatar

    The mountain looks very awesome! And a very beautifully written poem for it! 👍

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      It’s really awesome 💜

      Thank you Yasan .

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      1. Aptivi Avatar

        You’re most welcome, Maggie 💜

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  2. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    we csrry home the dmall stoned. While the large mountain looms becoming to retutn

    bravo

    nice one

    much love

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Gillena 💜

      Much love.

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  3. Dora Avatar

    Exquisite, Maggie, that feeling of something solid but mysterious (but known, somehow) that bears us as if we were children on its ancient corpus. I love these lines:

    “She rises from the island
    like an old thought,
    volcanic bone beneath the sun”

    and

    “the Milky Way
    spilled across their darkness
    before roads”

    and that mysterious connection of “something answers./Not in words./In bones.”

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Dora. 💜 You understood exactly what I was trying to put into words. Tindaya is one of those places that feels strangely familiar, as though the mountain remembers something we have forgotten. The locals call her La Montaña Mágica, and standing near her, you understand why. There is a presence there that is difficult to explain—you don’t just see the mountain, you feel her. Perhaps that is why “not in words, in bones” came to me. Thank you for such a beautiful prompt and for giving me the chance to write about a place that means so much to me.

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      1. Dora Avatar

        You’ve literally widened my horizon, Maggie. What an amazing place! Thank you for sharing. 🤗

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      2. Maggie Avatar

        Aww, thank you, Dora. 🤗💜 I’m so happy I could introduce you to Tindaya. She really is an extraordinary place, and I loved having the opportunity to share a little of her magic through your prompt.

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  4. thetigressawakens Avatar

    Very beautiful and poetic! Maggie this feels like a meditation on belonging. I love the progression from collecting small pieces of earth to placing a hand on something too immense to possess. “I know you” is my favorite line. I take respite in the though that our souls have been to these places before, so I definitely felt this one. 💙

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much. 💜 “I know you” came from that strange feeling I sometimes have in certain places—a recognition I can’t really explain. I share your thoughts about souls and places we may somehow have known before, although I always like to leave room in my poetry for each reader to find their own meaning. Tindaya gives me that feeling very strongly. I’m so glad this one spoke to you. 💙

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  5. Kim Whysall-Hammond Avatar

    Wow – your poem put me there. I so want to visit Tindaya now! (I’m an Astronomer with a penchant for archaeology)

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Wow, thank you so much, Kim! 💜 Coming from an astronomer with a love of archaeology, that means a lot. Tindaya really sounds like your kind of place! The ancient footprints and the mystery surrounding the mountain are fascinating, and our night skies here in Fuerteventura can be extraordinary too. I’m so happy the poem managed to take you there for a moment. If you ever make it to the island, I think Tindaya might steal a little piece of your heart.

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  6. poetisatinta Avatar

    That mountain is awesome Maggie as is your poem 🙌

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Ange 💜❤️

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  7. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    Love this especially; “Who pressed the shape of themselves into stone and trusted time to understand?”

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Sanaa 💜

      Whenever I think about those ancient footprints, I wonder about the people behind them—who they were, what the mountain meant to them, and whether they ever imagined that centuries later we would still be looking at their marks and wondering about their lives.

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  8. rothpoetry Avatar

    A wonderful poem, Maggie. I love how you view stones some collected and some experienced! well done!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Dwight 💜

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        You are welcome!

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  9. kim881 Avatar

    I’ve never been to Fuerteventura, or even the Canary Islands, but Tindaya as portrayed in your poem is mysterious and has a magnetic pull on me. The Magic Mountain indeed. I too have pieces of crystal and other stones; Jasper is one of my favourites. I love how the mountain rises from the island ‘like an old thought’, ‘volcanic bone beneath the sun’, I’ve often wondered who stood in places before me, so that resonates, and the list of three ‘Warm stone. Wind. Silence’ is so evocative.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Kim. 💜 I love that you collect crystals and stones too — there really is something special about holding a little piece of the earth in your hand. Tindaya has exactly that mysterious, magnetic feeling you describe. Even after living in the Canary Islands for many years, there are places here that still stop me in my tracks, and Tindaya is one of them. I also find myself wondering about the people who stood there centuries before us and what the mountain meant to them. I’m so glad “Warm stone. Wind. Silence.” resonated with you. Perhaps one day the Magic Mountain will pull you all the way to Fuerteventura.

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      1. kim881 Avatar

        Very much my pleasure, Maggie! 🩷

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  10. Outrageous Monk Avatar

    This is such a mesmerizing and deeply atmospheric piece, Maggie! 🏔️ The line ‘Some stones are not ours to carry. Some stones carry us’ is so profound and resonated with me so deeply. You captured the quiet, timeless magic of Tindaya so beautifully—thank you for taking us there with your words! ✨

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much. 💜 I’m especially touched that those final lines resonated with you. I have collected crystals and stones for many years, but Tindaya feels different—she is not something to possess, only to experience and respect. There is a quiet, ancient presence there that is difficult to explain until you feel it for yourself. I’m so happy my words could take you there for a little while.

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      1. Outrageous Monk Avatar

        Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. It’s always a pleasure connecting with you!

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  11. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Oh those magic mountains with carving… sometimes we do no longer know the ancient stories, but seeing the carvings or paintings we can imagine (especially when there is a moon above)

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you, Björn. 💜 That mystery is exactly what fascinates me about Tindaya. There are hundreds of foot-shaped carvings on the mountain, yet we can only wonder about the people who made them and the stories behind them. And yes — especially beneath the Moon! 🌙
      Standing there and imagining those same people looking at the same Moon and stars centuries ago makes the mountain feel even more magical.

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  12. Carol anne Avatar

    A gorgeous poem Maggie so beautiful… 👏👏🌹🌹

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Carol anne ❤️

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  13. marialberg Avatar

    I really enjoyed and was surprised by the initial turn in the poem from the stones you can carry to the stone that carries you. Nice premise.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Maria. 💜 I’m glad you noticed that turn. I’ve collected crystals and stones for many years, so I loved beginning with the idea of the little pieces of earth we can carry home with us, and then turning it around with Tindaya. Some places are simply too immense to possess — instead, they become part of us and somehow carry us.

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  14. freyathewriter Avatar

    Such a wonderful, heartfelt, glorious poem. The stone that carries you is such a powerful image. And thank you for sharing photos of the footprints and the story of the Magic Mountain.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much, Freya. 💜 I’m delighted that the image of the stone carrying us stayed with you. Tindaya is such a special place to me, and I’m so glad you enjoyed seeing the footprints and learning a little of the story behind the Magic Mountain too. It has been wonderful seeing how many people have connected with her through this poem.

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