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The receptionist smiled as Clara entered the old hotel.

“Welcome back.”

Clara frowned. “I’ve never been here before.”

“Of course.”

He handed her a brass key marked 17.

Upstairs, everything felt strangely familiar—the creaking floorboard, the faded wallpaper, even the lavender scent outside her room.

Inside stood a suitcase.

Her suitcase.

Except it was ancient.

Clara opened it.

A photograph lay on top: a woman standing beneath the hotel’s stone arches in 1926.

Same eyes.

Same face.

Same necklace Clara wore now.

On the back, someone had written:

Clara — Room 17.
She always comes back.

Downstairs, the receptionist turned the register’s page.


PHOTO PROMPT © Lori Wilson


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10 responses to “She always comes back”

  1. Carol anne Avatar

    wow! Cool take, Maggie, really awesome! 🙌😘

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Carol anne 😘

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  2. James Pyles Avatar

    Reincarnation?

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Or parallel universe 😉

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  3. Neil MacDonald Avatar

    Doomed to cycle!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Looks like it .

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  4. Lisa or Li Avatar

    Maggie, your story gives me the goosebumps. She’s caught in a time loop. I’m glad she doesn’t remember, so it feels fresh.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Time loop I would say as well.

      Yes, better not to remember, better learning experience then 😊

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  5. Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬ Avatar

    Caught in a time warp? Very good, Maggie. 👏🏼

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Nancy 😊 💜
      Happy to hear you enjoyed it.

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