Writing Story Openings Over a Cuppa

Nobody in the village remembered when the Pipe People first appeared.

They simply arrived one autumn morning, standing silently beside the old logging road, assembled from rusted valves, broken horns, and forgotten machinery. Children waved. Adults laughed. Travelers stopped to take photographs before driving on.

Only Edith refused to look at them.

She kept her curtains closed, even on bright afternoons, because she knew what everyone else had forgotten.

The Pipe People weren’t sculptures.

They were witnesses.

Every few years, after the first heavy rain of October, one of their metal heads would turn ever so slightly toward the forest. By sunrise, someone would be missing.

This morning, Edith heard the familiar groan of rust twisting against rust.

When she looked out the window, every Pipe Person was facing her house.


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14 responses to “Story Chat Craft Workshop #1”

  1. Carol anne Avatar

    brilliant 💕💕

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you my friend ❤️💜

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  2. Sadje/ Sadie Avatar

    This is a great start to your story.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Sadje 💜

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      1. Sadje/ Sadie Avatar

        You’re welcome

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  3. Marsha Avatar

    Wow, that is quite an imaginative story, Maggie. Gorgeous. I’ll print the first line in my round-up post then link to yours for the rest of the story. I can’t wait to share it with the creator of the pipe people. :) xxx

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Marsha 💜❤️.

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      1. Marsha Avatar

        The opening is the perfect tip of an iceburg.

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  4. Workshop #1 Community Roundup – Marsha Ingrao Always Write Avatar

    […] Nobody in the village remembered when the Pipe People first appeared. Read on. […]

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  5. Priscilla Bettis Avatar

    Yikes, I’ll never look at a pipe sculpture the same way again. Excellent response to the picture prompt, Maggie!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Priscilla .

      Happy you enjoyed it.

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  6. Marsha Avatar

    I loved this. My friend who created the pipe people will love it, too! :)

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Marsha 💜

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      1. Marsha Avatar

        Thank you! :)

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