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The Visitor

Everyone in the apartment complex noticed the cloud.

It hovered above the mountains, darker and more purposeful than the others, as if it knew exactly where it was going.

Children pointed. Neighbors took photographs. The old woman on the third floor simply smiled.

“They’ve come back,” she whispered.

“Who?”

“The dream-carriers.”

That night, people slept deeply. Forgotten faces appeared in their dreams. Lost songs returned. Old hurts loosened their grip.

By morning, the strange cloud was gone.

But all across the valley, people woke feeling lighter than they had in years.


With love, coffee, poetry, and stardust,

— Maggie The Afterlove Voice 💫


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17 responses to “The Visitor”

  1. Neil MacDonald Avatar

    Nobody thought it was a conspiracy?

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Don’t look like they did 😊☀️

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  2. Lisa or Li Avatar

    Maggie, you have a wonderful imagination. Great story!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Lisa 💜

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      1. Lisa or Li Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  3. James Pyles Avatar

    The cloud must be a lot heavier when it leaves.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      It would probably be ☀️

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  4. poetisatinta Avatar

    What a lovely idea – I hope one comes over soon 😊

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Ange 💜

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  5. Sandra Avatar

    I think we’re in dire need of such a cloud in our country right now.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Think the whole world need it 😘

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  6. James McEwan Avatar

    My 3 and 1/2 year old grandson has a saying, “Team work makes the dream work.” This seems to fit your uplifting story.

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  7. Nancy's Notes 🖊️♬ Avatar

    Love this take, Maggie. We need this for real!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Yes, we do need this 💜

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  8. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    What a lovely, uplifting story, Maggie!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you 💜

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