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This poem was one of the first I wrote for dVerse

Open Link Night #409

When the Rails Were New

When the rails were new,
they cut the land like a prophecy,
iron laid over bones and prayers.

Ancestors stood in the dust,
watching the whistle split the sky,
naming what would be taken.

The train carried voices with it—
ghost-songs, drumbeats,
last breaths—
westward,
into forgetting.

Men chased distance,
not knowing
the dead were riding too,
fingers wrapped around memory.

Prisons rose where spirits lingered,
steel cages humming with old grief,
time circling instead of passing.

Still the whistle cried at dusk,
a call no soul could outrun,
pulling the living toward reckoning.

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— Maggie The Afterlove Voice 💫


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10 responses to “When the Rails Were New”

  1. kim881 Avatar

    It’s a sad history, Maggie, when iron is ‘laid over bones and prayers’, but we must never forget ancestors standing in the dust. An excellent poem.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Yes, very sad history…

      Thank you Kim 💜

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      1. kim881 Avatar

        You’re welcome, Maggie. 💕

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  2. Reelika Pedak Avatar

    a sad history indeed but I think your poem honours it very well and it’s great to have poets who do so and in doing so keep the bones ‘alive’ (according to the saying that a person truly dies when nobody talks about them).

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Reelika .

      History shouldn’t be forgotten.

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  3. paeansunplugged Avatar

    An excellent write, Maggie. History is full of such instances.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      You are so right about history my friend. And still humanity repeats history, but in new “clothing “.

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  4. Carol anne Avatar

    A beautiful poem Maggie 💖💖👌👌

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Carol anne 💜 😘

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