PROMPT #432

Reena’s Xploration Challenge

I give you a sentence this week to act as a thought-starter.“

A thought brushed my palm, then scattered like a startled bird.”

Let us see where the bird takes you 🙂

Reena’s Xploration Challenge #432

The Bird Between Thoughts

A thought brushed my palm, then scattered like a startled bird.

I almost caught it.

That fragile thing—
half memory,
half feeling.

It arrived softly,
like something forgotten
returning without warning.

For a moment,
I knew it.

Knew the shape of it,
the ache of it,
the quiet truth
it carried.

But thoughts are strange creatures.

Some perch gently,
waiting to be understood.

Others—

flutter wild-
winged,
afraid of being named.

And before I could hold it,
it was gone.

Leaving only
the faint warmth
against my skin,

and the feeling
that something important
had visited me—

if only for a moment.

So I stood there,
hand open to the sky,

wondering
if some thoughts
aren’t meant to stay—

only to remind us
that even the unseen
still finds ways
to touch us.


With love

— Maggie The Afterlove Voice 💫


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11 responses to “The Bird Between Thoughts”

  1. Reena Saxena Avatar

    Beautifully done!

    The thought was one of deemed 50000, that cross our minds everyday. Their flight saves overload on memory, yet they leave impressions on the subconscious.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Reena ❤️ 💜

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  2. poetisatinta Avatar

    Beautiful Maggie especially that last stanza 🩷

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Ange 💜❤️

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  3. Sadje/ Sadie Avatar

    A lovely take on this challenge 💗

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you my friend 💜 ❤️

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      1. Sadje/ Sadie Avatar

        You’re most welcome

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  4. Carol anne Avatar

    A beautiful poem Maggie 🤗🤗💜💜

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you my friend 💜 ❤️

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