PROMPT #427

In response to Reena’s Xploration Challenge: https://wp.me/p6HvcB-dvk

The Keeper of Hours

It was never meant to be seen.

Hidden between shelves of forgotten books and candlelight that never quite went out,it sat—watching.

Not alive. Not entirely.

Its eyes were clocks,measuring more than time.

Scholars had come and gone,turning pages, chasing answers,never noticing the quiet ticking that did not belong to any clock in the room.

But it noticed them.

Each question asked. Each truth avoided. Each moment wasted.

Time, it had learned,was not counted in seconds but in awareness.

One evening,a reader lingered longer than the others.

She paused.Looked up.

And for the first time—the Keeper felt something shift.

Recognition.

The ticking slowed.

Because time,when truly seen,does not rush.

It listens.

And somewhere between the turning gears and the soft glow of candlelight,the machine understood what it had been guarding all along:

Not time itself—but the moments we finally wake up inside it.

— Maggie
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19 responses to “The Keeper of Hours”

  1. Reena Saxena Avatar

    This is outstanding, Maggie! It is the best that I’ve read from your pieces.

    Thanks for sharing this!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Oh my.. now i got touched to tears.
      Thank you so much😘

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      1. Reena Saxena Avatar

        ❤️❤️

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  2. Rohini Avatar

    Way to go Maggie.This is phenomenal.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Aww , thank you so much Ro ❤️😘

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      1. Rohini Avatar

        You’re welcome friend.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you my friend ♥️. How did the eye appointment go ?

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      1. Sadje/ Sadie Avatar

        You’re welcome. The doctor said that things aren’t as bad as he expected. He recommended eye drops for a week. Hopefully the inflammation will
        Settle. Amen. Thank you so much

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      2. Maggie Avatar

        That was a relief, my friend 😘

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      3. Sadje/ Sadie Avatar

        It is dear friend. Thanks so much

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  3. Eugi Avatar

    Absolutely stunning, Maggie. Brava!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Eugi 💜

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      1. Eugi Avatar

        You’re welcome, Maggie.

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  4. Carol anne Avatar

    loved this Maggie, such a wonderful story!! 💜💜😀😀

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you my friend ♥️

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  5. Marsha Avatar

    What a wonderful poem, Maggie. Wow! How do you think like that? It’s amazing!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you, Marsha 💜
      Some pieces arrive quietly, already formed somewhere beyond me. I just try to be still enough to hear them.

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