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Where the Tide Was

These wet stones along the shore
still hold the shape of water.

Seaweed clings in tired ribbons,
barnacles pale as old scars,
the tide having slipped away
without apology.

I walk the exposed ground slowly,
as if stepping through memory.

There are places the sea once filled
that now breathe air again —
small pools reflecting sky,
quiet, temporary mirrors.

It makes me think of absence:
how something leaving
can reveal the map
of where it lived.

Soon the water will return,
smoothing everything again.

But for this moment
the shoreline shows its bones,
and I recognize
myself in it.

— Maggie
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15 responses to “Where the Tide Was”

  1. Pamela Avatar

    Beautiful write and the final stanza says it all. Lovely.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Pamela 😊

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  2. ByteSizedStudio Avatar

    Very nice opening hook.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you .

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  3. Carol anne Avatar

    :-) 🙌💜💜

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  4. rothpoetry Avatar

    A lovely well written poem!

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you 😊💜

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        You are very welcome!

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  5. pandamoniumcat Avatar

    Quite beautifully written, much enjoyed.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you 😊

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  6. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is so beautiful. I love; “There are places the sea once filled that now breathe air again — small pools reflecting sky, quiet, temporary mirrors.” ❤️❤️

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Sanaa ❤️❤️

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  7. kim881 Avatar

    A stunning poem, Maggie! I love the thought of stones holding the shape of water. the tide slipping away without apology, and those pools, ‘quiet, temporary mirrors’.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Kim 💜 😊

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      1. kim881 Avatar

        My pleasure, Maggie.

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