13.02.2026 | Friday Fictioneers story

In response to: https://rochellewisoff.com/

The Long Way Home

Every afternoon she chose the longer pavement.

Cars rushed along the road, engines impatient, but beneath the trees time moved differently. Leaves whispered. Shadows stretched.

She walked slowly, letter folded in her pocket, reading it again in her mind.

“It’s benign,” the doctor had written.

The word still felt fragile, like something that might break if spoken too loudly.

Halfway down the path she stopped, looked up through the green canopy, and allowed herself to breathe fully for the first time in weeks.

The long way home no longer felt heavy. It felt like grace.

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— Maggie
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15 responses to “The Long Way Home”

  1. Neil MacDonald Avatar

    I loved “beneath the trees time moved differently”

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Neil 😊

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  2. Dale Avatar

    This is beautiful, Maggie. I can well imagine that is how some would react to such news.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Dale 💜. Yes, I would imagine that too.

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  3. Carol anne Avatar

    awesome take a wonderful story! 💜💜😉😉

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Carol anne 💜💜💜

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Maggie,

    Beautiful piece. I could feel the relief flooding her.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you Rochellle 💜

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  5. James McEwan Avatar

    An emotional piece that drew me in deeply.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you James 😊

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  6. Brenda's Thoughts Avatar

    Oh, I love this. I remember well the deep feelings of relief and gratitude at receiving that “word.” Beautifully expressed!

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  7. Lisa or Li Avatar

    Beautiful writing, Maggie. This is such a resonant line for me:

    The word still felt fragile, like something that might break if spoken too loudly.

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    1. Maggie Avatar

      Thank you so much Lisa 💜 😊

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      1. Lisa or Li Avatar

        You’re very welcome.

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